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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Sometimes people are like "oh i have a bad life ". if you have a bad life, you won't have someone who really cares about you. i'm sure no one has a bad life, because i believe everyone has someone who really cares about them.
Sometimes people are like "oh i have a bad life ". if you have a bad life, you won't have someone who really cares about you. i'm sure no one has a bad life, because i believe everyone has someone who really cares about them.
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The main problem with this is incorrect capitalisation. Sentences must begin with a capital letter (the words in quotes are also considered a sentence). The word "I" must always be capitalised, wherever it appears.
- The main problem with this is incorrect capitalisation.
- Sentences must begin with a capital letter (the words in quotes are also considered a sentence).
- The word "I" must always be capitalised, wherever it appears.
- This use of the word "like" to indicate what someone says is casual, and inappropriate in many written contexts.
- You also have an errant space.
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The main problem with this is incorrect capitalisation. Sentences must begin with a capital letter (the words in quotes are also considered a sentence). The word "I" must always be capitalised, wherever it appears.
This use of the word "like" to indicate what someone says is casual, and inappropriate in many written contexts.
You also have an errant space.
This use of the word "like" to indicate what someone says is casual, and inappropriate in many written contexts.
You also have an errant space.
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