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I've started writing a paragraphabout the Jazz Age and specifically Fitzgerlad's book "The Great Gatsby" and I need your opinions about it.Thank you in advanceIn the United State and during the roaring twenties, we recognize a new era called the Jazz Age. This era is described as the creation of a new style of music that uses new musical instruments such as « saxos ». Additionly, during this period, people were eagerly willing to gain fortune regardless of its way which in most cases was an illegal one. Many authors have written about it, among them is Francis.Scot Fitzgerlad a famous author who described the features of this era in his famous novel ‘The Great Gastby’. In this novel, he talked about the way people lived and the difference between the West and East of America. Illustruating this in his character Nike Carraway who was linving in a midwestern family and then decided to go east. He was afraid of the misunderstanding of the people there this also picture the difference in social class. At that time, a new class has been raised « nouveau rich » those who recently made money after the prohibition of selling alcohol in America.