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Virginia274 Posted 13 years ago
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Is there anyone who can help me and find my mistakes in my paragraph.
An excessive awful problem in our city that concern us all,is noise pollution.
Due to expanding usage of transportation and other factors,the noise pollution also has been increased.
Students,employees and drivers of all vehicles should be educated to control the noise level.
Laws must be passed to keep factories far from cities areas.
Is there anyone who can help me and find my mistakes in my paragraph.
An excessive awful problem in our city that concern us all,is noise pollution.
Due to expanding usage of transportation and other factors,the noise pollution also has been increased.
Students,employees and drivers of all vehicles should be educated to control the noise level.
Laws must be passed to keep factories far from cities areas.
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An excessively awful [ OR exceedingly bad] problem in our city, that [ OR which] concerns us all, is noise pollution. Due to the expanding usage of transportation and other factors, (the) noise pollution has also increased. Students, employees and drivers of all vehicles should be educated to control the noise level.
- An excessively awful [ OR exceedingly bad] problem in our city, that [ OR which] concerns us all, is noise pollution.
- Due to the expanding usage of transportation and other factors, (the) noise pollution has also increased.
- Students, employees and drivers of all vehicles should be educated to control the noise level.
- Laws must be passed to keep [ OR site, place or position] factories far (away) from city areas.
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An excessively awful [OR exceedingly bad] problem in our city, that [OR which] concerns us all, is noise pollution.
Due to the expanding usage of transportation and other factors, (the) noise pollution has also increased.
Students, employees and drivers of all vehicles should be educated to control the noise level.
Laws must be passed to keep [OR site, place or pos
Due to the expanding usage of transportation and other factors, (the) noise pollution has also increased.
Students, employees and drivers of all vehicles should be educated to control the noise level.
Laws must be passed to keep [OR site, place or pos
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