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Hi all teacher, Urgently need your help. below is the explanation that i wrote. i have no idea how to change it to a proper letter explanation. Please help... Thanks a lot..

'I was drove to training instead of stay in the hostel for the first day. i reach learning centre at 8.30am but i never expect it is really difficult to find a parking, i was park my car outside learning centre at opposite of BSN building with 1KM walking distance to the learning centre. The reason not staying in hostel is because of i brought my pregnant wife along to KL and rent a room outside from learning centre'

I know it might a lots of mistake, but i really no idea now..

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

'I drove to training instead of staying in the hostel the first day.
I reached the learning centre at 8.30 am but I never expected such difficulty in finding a parking space. I parked my car opposite the BSN building which was 1 km walking distance away from the learning centre.. The reason I did not stay in the hostel was because I brought my pregnant wife along with me to KL and rented a room instead.

Han sern chen · Answer

Thanks Alphecca..

i left from Bukit Jalil at 7.30am, on the way to learning centre my car was broking down. Car tow reach at 8.05am, i drove my friend's car to the learning centre..

Urgently need your help.. thousand thanks!....

AlpheccaStars · Answer

i left Bukit Jalil at 7.30am. On the way to the learning centre, my car broke down. The tow truck came at 8.05am. I drove my friend's car to the learning centre..

Han sern chen · Answer

Thanks again Alphecca.. last 2 more questions.. i really dont know how to answer that.. thanks a lot..

1. Please give your personal views on the main objectives of attending this specific training.

2. How do you think trainings can contribute to improving your sales performance?

AlpheccaStars · Answer

han sern chen1. Please give your personal views on the main objectives of attending this specific training.

It is asking you for your opinion.
Why did you attend this training?
What did you want to achieve?

han sern chen2. How do you think trainings can contribute to improving your sales performance?

You are selling products. It is asking you for your opinion.
How the training will help you increase your customers and the amount of product that you sell?

Han sern chen · Answer

It is asking you for your opinion.
Why did you attend this training?
What did you want to achieve?

New joiner, train about products, knowledge and company direction.
To be a performers.

You are selling products. It is asking you for your opinion.
How the training will help you increase your customers and the amount of product that you sell?

Everything fine, (that's the only question i dont know how to answer)...

AlpheccaStars · Answer

han sern chenEverything fine, (that's the only question i dont know how to answer)...

Is your boss is happy that you don't try to work harder and make more profits for the company?

Han sern chen · Answer

Could you don't mind to help me answer this 2 questions?

Thanks...

AlpheccaStars · Answer

I cannot answer these questions, because I do not know about you. I do not know your opinions.

Han sern chen · Answer

Thanks a lot AlpheccaStars.. But i do have another crucial matter happened to me now.. An explanation letter of did not declare previous employment and provide false information in my Application form in relation to my employment background.

The letter i receive from employment as below;

'NOTICE OF INTENDED DISCIPLINARY ACTION & SUSPENSION FROM SERVICE
It was reported that you had made a declaration and provided false information in your Employment Application Form in relation to your employment background.

Investigation reveal that you were under ABC Bank employment from 16 May 2005 until 28 Octocber 2005 (Sales Department) and from 13 April 2010 until 15 October 2010 (Operation Department). However, you had misrepresented the ABC Bank when in your resume, and your Employment Application you had stated that you were under the employment of XYZ company from August 2009 until March 2011.

Your above conduct constitutes a major misconduct as it appears to involve element of dishonestly and throws considerable doubt on your integrity. Your conduct also amount to an act misleading the Bank wherein you have made the following declaration in your Employment Application Form which reads as follow;-

I, Chen hereby declare that all the particular, hereinbefore stated by me are true and accurate to the best of my knowledge and belief. I understand that I will be subjected to disqualification or immediate dismissal if the particular are untrue. I hereby give consent to the Bank and it's designated agents to perform an employment background check which includes but is not limited to, the following areas; names and dates of previous / current employment, work experience reference check, workers compensation / claims, criminal history records, wants and warrants records, educational verification, license verification, credit history, civil cases, any sanction lists and drug testing.

The Bank has contemplated that in this circumstance, dismissal is warranted. However, before any decision is made, you are hereby given the opportunity to refuse and / or rebut the allegations against you and / or provide mitigating factors by 9 May 2012. If we did not receive any reply from you by the said date, you will presumed to have no explanation to offer to refute and / or rebut the allegations against you. The Bank will thereafter be at liberty to proceed further on the matter on such presumption without any further reference to you. In view of the above, the Bank decided to suspend you from the service with effect from 3 May 2012 until further notice.

Your sincerely'..

Quite serious, I really no idea how reply this letter.
I need a deepest apologies, polite, no intention to lie and acceptable letter to reply it..

Below is the reason why i did not declare my previous employment.
1. Rushing to attend interview during lunch hour after received call from the Bank at the same day.
2. Resume printed out from www.jobstreet.com website, Overlook Resume did not stated ABC Bank.
3. Copy 100% from resume to Employment Application Form.

Millions Thanks..

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