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Mizanur Posted 15 years ago
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I also applied for 2011 intake. I had not been accepted last year. I am tremendously impressed by University of ABC and I would like nothing better than to grab the opportunity to contribute positively towards campus life in various ways. I will do whatever it takes to correct or eradicate any deficiencies that you see hindering me in your program last year.
When I applied for the programme in previous year, I had not my Master’s. This year I am applying with my Master’s with good result/marks. I suppose it will add more weight to my candidature for Master’s programme at University of ABC. In the mean time I also got some full time job experience in both local and Multi-national organizations.
I need correction of above para...
When I applied for the programme in previous year, I had not my Master’s. This year I am applying with my Master’s with good result/marks. I suppose it will add more weight to my candidature for Master’s programme at University of ABC. In the mean time I also got some full time job experience in both local and Multi-national organizations.
I need correction of above para...
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Hi I would like a veteran member to let me know if the underlined sentence here is natural and proper. I also applied for 2011 intake. I had not been accepted last year.
- Hi I would like a veteran member to let me know if the underlined sentence here is natural and proper.
- I also applied for 2011 intake.
- I had not been accepted last year.
- I am tremendously impressed by University of ABC and I would like nothing better than to grab the opportunity to contribute positively towards campus life in various ways.
- I will do whatever it takes to correct or eradicate any deficiencies that you see hindering me in your program last year.
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Hi
I would like a veteran member to let me know if the underlined sentence here is natural and proper.
I also applied for 2011 intake. I had not been accepted last year. I am tremendously impressed by University of ABC and I would like nothing better than to grab the opportunity to contribute positively towards campus life in various wa
I would like a veteran member to let me know if the underlined sentence here is natural and proper.
I also applied for 2011 intake. I had not been accepted last year. I am tremendously impressed by University of ABC and I would like nothing better than to grab the opportunity to contribute positively towards campus life in various wa
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I don't think the underlined sentence is correct.
I think it should be 'I will do whatever it takes to correct or eradicate any deficiencies that you saw in me which hindered your program last year.'
I think it should be 'I will do whatever it takes to correct or eradicate any deficiencies that you saw in me which hindered your program last year.'
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Hi Vivek,
I think you didn't get the meaning of the sentence.
Hope someone will give me the correct sentence.
Prajwal
I think you didn't get the meaning of the sentence.
This phrase means 'he was a obstacle to the program.' The original sentence means 'it hindered the author from getting the admission into the program.'
'that you saw in me which hindered your program last year.'
Hope someone will give me the correct sentence.
Prajwal
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