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ShimaN Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Correction

Would you please correct these sentences and and give some tips or explanation if possible:

Wish I was there, standing at the edge, ready to jump and feel the rush of excitement!

Wish I was there trying to discover beauties through the darkness. (Talking about a cave)

Wish I was there walking and running on (the) sand(s)

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Hello, Shima - and welcome to English Forums. - 'Were' is more formal. -- 'Beauty' is usually a non-count noun.

  • Hello, Shima - and welcome to English Forums.
  • - 'Were' is more formal.
  • -- 'Beauty' is usually a non-count noun.
  • Wish I were/was there walking and running on the sand.
  • -- 'Sand is usually a non-count noun.
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Hello, Shima - and welcome to English Forums.

Wish I were/was there, standing at the edge, ready to jump, and feeling the rush of excitement!- 'Were' is more formal.

Wish I were/was there trying to discover beauty through the darkness.-- 'Beauty' is usually a non-count noun.

Wish I were/was there walking and

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