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Hrsanei Posted 15 years ago
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Hi.
The following sentences is a part of my letter to one of my colleague in America.
I cherish the hope of cooperating with your company in near future. Job matters aside , any ties with your company would be an excuse(a great opportunity) to see you here more.
I have doubt about two phrases here, one
job matters aside, I mean apart from business stuff do I convey the meaning properly,the second is that I am hesitant to use would be an excuse or would be a great opportunity.
Your proofreading in case of mistakes in other phrases is highly appreciated
The following sentences is a part of my letter to one of my colleague in America.
I cherish the hope of cooperating with your company in near future. Job matters aside , any ties with your company would be an excuse(a great opportunity) to see you here more.
I have doubt about two phrases here, one
job matters aside, I mean apart from business stuff do I convey the meaning properly,the second is that I am hesitant to use would be an excuse or would be a great opportunity.
Your proofreading in case of mistakes in other phrases is highly appreciated
Top answer
Hi, I just have time for a quick comment. 'Cherish' is a pretty personal and emotional word. Business communications are not usually emotional.
- Hi, I just have time for a quick comment.
- 'Cherish' is a pretty personal and emotional word.
- Business communications are not usually emotional.
- Clive
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Hi,
I just have time for a quick comment.
'Cherish' is a pretty personal and emotional word. Business communications are not usually emotional.
Clive
I just have time for a quick comment.
'Cherish' is a pretty personal and emotional word. Business communications are not usually emotional.
Clive
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