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Naju Posted 16 years ago
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Correction.

Hi, Is it right way to speak?

Even though economically our country is developing faster than any other country. It doesn't develop such things like poverty yet. We can see lots of poor people around many states in our country. It clearly shows that our country's management is not good. Country only concentrates on economic sectors and other things.

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I have underlined some problem areas: Hi, Is it right way to speak ? Even though economically our country is developing faster than any other country. It doesn't develop such things like poverty yet.

  • I have underlined some problem areas: Hi, Is it right way to speak ?
  • Even though economically our country is developing faster than any other country.
  • It doesn't develop such things like poverty yet.
  • We can see lots of poor people around many states in our country.
  • It clearly shows that our country's management is not good.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

Hi, Is it right way to speak? Even though economically our country is developing faster than any other country. It doesn't develop such things like poverty yet. We can see lots of poor people around many states in our country. It clearly shows that our country's management is not good.

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