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SunnyShiny Posted 16 years ago
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could you please correct my paragragh and if there is a better way to tell it, could you please say it?

(name of the palce) Prohebited hunting area :
It is located in the (number) kilometers away from (name of palce). This area is under conservation of environmental province which covers (number) hectares vast which is consisting of different kinds of plants and animals.
  

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(name of the place ) hunting-prohibited area located ( number) kilometers from (name of place ). This area covers (number) hectares set aside for the conservation of different kinds of plants and animals.

  • (name of the place ) hunting-prohibited area located ( number) kilometers from (name of place ).
  • This area covers (number) hectares set aside for the conservation of different kinds of plants and animals.
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(name of the place) hunting-prohibited area located (number) kilometers from (name of place). This area covers (number) hectares set aside for the conservation of different kinds of plants and animals.
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I believe that it's almost ok.

(PLACE'S NAME) PROHIBITED hunting area : It is located (number) kilometers from (name of palce). This area is under environmental protection which covers (number) hectares vast which is consisting of different kinds of plants and animals.

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