0pls correct this sntence if there are any mistakes... 02br 00do you have any suggestions? i think this sentence is too long.. Y_Y02br 00thx... 02br 02br 00appropriate information might provide appropriate knowledge and that knowledge might result in some appropriate decisions in order to solve the company’s problems or achieve the company’s goals.0-
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02br 00Other than that, there's nothing wrong with it. 02br 00CJ 0-
— CalifJim
02br 00Other than that, there's nothing wrong with it.
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0It's very repetitive (01i00appropriate, appropriate, appropriate, might, might, knowledge, knowledge, company's company's02i00), and you need to apply some basic techniques like capitalization and punctuation.02br 00Other than that, there's nothing wrong with it. The grammar is fine.02br 00CJ 0-