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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

correction #1

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Could you please help me to correct my mistakes in the paragraphs below?

Cartoons are drawings and they tell a story.
There are cartoons in newspapers. These cartoons
tell about the news. Sometimes they are
funny.

Cartoon strips are called comics. They
are in newspapers too. Each day a cartoonist
draws the characters to tell a funny story.

Sometimes these characters give the readers a message.
Cartoonists put the words that the characters say or think
into ‘balloons’ above their heads.

We see some cartoons on television and they are
called cartoons or animations. Visial artists draw and then put lots
of pictures onto film. When we screen the film through a projector
the characters seem to move

People have drawn cartoons for hundreds of years.
At first they were in newspapers so that more people would buy the
papers. The person who draws the cartoon is called a cartoonist. They use
lines to show how the characters move. Different lines on the face show how the
characters feel.
  

Top answer

It's good except for one sentence. When we show screen the film through a projector the characters seem to move .

  • It's good except for one sentence.
  • When we show screen the film through a projector the characters seem to move .
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It's good except for one sentence.

When we show screen the film through a projector the characters seem to move.

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