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Veronica 222 Posted 13 years ago
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Computers can seem to be giant brains but sometimes people do think that these creatures aren’t at all smart compared to us. Many share various opinion. Some admire the technique but some hate it. Therefore, there isn’t any united point of view.
However, I suppose that all computers are improbably genius. They are able to keep complicated information, process data, calculate, save and delete documents… And they also have access to the Internet where we can find anything we would like to. Nowadays information technology – a science about computers, is taught in all schools of the world. I believe, that you can find no-one who hasn’t got a laptop, a tablet or a smartphone having diverse applications and the Net. Each contemporary person uses these electronic devices for work, business, fun, and communication (calling or chatting). (134) Though, there’s the other side of the coin: few suffer from computering, they get nervous, anxious, and, at times, even crazy!
Thereby, people haven’t got the definite estimation about computers. (154)
  

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Computers may seem to be giant brains but sometimes people think that they are not that smart like human brains. There are various opinions; some admire technology but some hate it.
However, in my opinion, computers are important as they provide many facilities such as storing, processing, and analyzing data. We can log on to World Wide Web through computers and search for information we n

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