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SunnyShiny Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Correcting paragragh

hey all,
if it is possible for you. please help me to correctthis paragraph. thanks

"In our society, responsibility for growing up children is one of the most important factors of making a healthy and steady community. As well as having a healthy society, having a good family has a great influence because family is a small part of community. This question that who are more responsible in having children, need to survey carefully. I believe fathers and mothers has the same duty on their children. "
  

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In our society, responsibility for raising children is one of the most important factors of making a healthy and steady community. As well as having a healthy society, having a good family has a great influence because family is a small part of community. This question, that who is more responsible when raising children, needs to be surveyed carefully.

— Magnum960

  • In our society, responsibility for raising children is one of the most important factors of making a healthy and steady community.
  • As well as having a healthy society, having a good family has a great influence because family is a small part of community.
  • This question, that who is more responsible when raising children, needs to be surveyed carefully.
  • I believe fathers and mothers have the same duty to their children.
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In our society, responsibility for raising children is one of the most important factors of making a healthy and steady community. As well as having a healthy society, having a good family has a great influence because family is a small part of community. This question, that who is more responsible when raising children, needs to be surveyed carefully. I believe fathers and mothers
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