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Lu14 Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Correcting mistakes
HAY, CAN SOMEONE PLEASE CORRECTED THAT TEXT FOR ME???
Fredi Miler is Slovenian songwriter, miner , singer. He was born 22th May in 1967 in Crna na Koroškem. He became famous in 2004 with song Vedno si sanjala njega. His nickname is Fredy. He has released one album in 2009. the title is Vse dni nemir.
Maks Strmcnik is Slovenian composer and organist. He was born on 23th October in 1948 also in Crna na Koroškem. He studied composition at the Academy of Music and in the 1974 he finished it. He works as a professor at the Academy of Music , since 1999, he is the head of the department for church music at this institution . In 1989 he was awarded the Preseren Fund Concerto for Organ, musical saw and orchestra .
Ditka Cepin is Slovenian guitarist. She is 22 years old. Currently he lives in Prevalje. She is a young music artist who has already experienced a lot of success. I believe that we will hear about her much more in the future.
Great success abroad, they were given two of her compositions , namely at the prestigious contest in London (United Kingdom Songwriting Contest ) , the song "My Guitar " in 2011 as semifinalists in the category of love songs , my completely authorial song " Dreamer " is 2013 was a finalist in the category of singer / songwriter . Some of her best-known songs are Ne bodi kot drugi, Nekaj je v zraku, Dober dan življenje and others.
Fredi Miler is Slovenian songwriter, miner , singer. He was born 22th May in 1967 in Crna na Koroškem. He became famous in 2004 with song Vedno si sanjala njega. His nickname is Fredy. He has released one album in 2009. the title is Vse dni nemir.
Maks Strmcnik is Slovenian composer and organist. He was born on 23th October in 1948 also in Crna na Koroškem. He studied composition at the Academy of Music and in the 1974 he finished it. He works as a professor at the Academy of Music , since 1999, he is the head of the department for church music at this institution . In 1989 he was awarded the Preseren Fund Concerto for Organ, musical saw and orchestra .
Ditka Cepin is Slovenian guitarist. She is 22 years old. Currently he lives in Prevalje. She is a young music artist who has already experienced a lot of success. I believe that we will hear about her much more in the future.
Great success abroad, they were given two of her compositions , namely at the prestigious contest in London (United Kingdom Songwriting Contest ) , the song "My Guitar " in 2011 as semifinalists in the category of love songs , my completely authorial song " Dreamer " is 2013 was a finalist in the category of singer / songwriter . Some of her best-known songs are Ne bodi kot drugi, Nekaj je v zraku, Dober dan življenje and others.
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"Hay" is food for horses. " Your paragraph has many errors in it. The good thing is that it makes sense.
- "Hay" is food for horses.
- " Your paragraph has many errors in it.
- The good thing is that it makes sense.
- It is really hard to point out all the mistakes you have and explain them.
- I don't really like to just correct your paragraph, but I think that is the best thing to do with this.
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"Hay" is food for horses. You meant "hey."
Your paragraph has many errors in it. The good thing is that it makes sense. It is really hard to point out all the mistakes you have and explain them. I don't really like to just correct your paragraph, but I think that is the best thing to do with this.
Fredi Miler is a Slovenian songwriter, miner , and singer. He was born on the 22th
Your paragraph has many errors in it. The good thing is that it makes sense. It is really hard to point out all the mistakes you have and explain them. I don't really like to just correct your paragraph, but I think that is the best thing to do with this.
Fredi Miler is a Slovenian songwriter, miner , and singer. He was born on the 22th
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Englishmaven22th May in 196722nd May, 1967
Englishmaven23th October in 194823rd October, 1948
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