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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Correcting Fragments

If a woman from the desert tribe showed anger toward her husband, she was whipped in front of the whole village. And shunned by the rest of the women.
  

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Hi, If a woman from the desert tribe showed anger toward her husband, she was whipped in front of the whole village and shunned by the rest of the women. Best wishes, Clive

  • Hi, If a woman from the desert tribe showed anger toward her husband, she was whipped in front of the whole village and shunned by the rest of the women.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
If a woman from the desert tribe showed anger toward her husband, she was whipped in front of the whole village and shunned by the rest of the women.

Best wishes, Clive
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AnonymousIf a woman from the desert tribe showed anger toward her husband, she was whipped in front of the whole village. And shunned by the rest of the women.

This is a good example of why we should not begin a sentence with 'and', unless we are very confident that what follows is correct. [And know what we are doing

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