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Desireandlove Posted 18 years ago
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Correcting a sentencen for me

"If my child came up to me and told me that he/she is gay I would react negatively and get disappointed, to be honoust. I know that people who are gay are struggling in the in the everyday life, but is hard to accept it. We all want regular child, not a child who are different from others. That would most probably destroy our reputation."

Can someone here help me with correcting this sentence?

Thanks for helping me.
  

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"If my child came up to me and told me that he/she is gay I would react negatively and be get disappointed, to be honest honoust . I know that people who are gay struggle are struggling in the in (the ir ) everyday life, but it is hard to accept (it). We all want regular child ren , not a child who is are different from others.

  • "If my child came up to me and told me that he/she is gay I would react negatively and be get disappointed, to be honest honoust .
  • I know that people who are gay struggle are struggling in the in (the ir ) everyday life, but it is hard to accept (it).
  • We all want regular child ren , not a child who is are different from others.
  • "
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"If my child came up to me and told me that he/she is gay I would react negatively and be get disappointed, to be honest honoust. I know that people who are gay struggle are struggling in the in (their) everyday life, but it is hard to accept (it). We all want regular children
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"If my child came up to me and told me that he/she is gay I would react negatively and be get disappointed, to be honest. I know that people who are gay are struggling in the in the everyday life, but it is hard to accept it. We all want a normal regular child, not a child who
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Thanks for helping me, I really appreciate your efforts on this forum.

Can someone here correct this sentence here for me?

"“When I am trying to get along with my teacher, my teacher is stark dismissive. Maybe because I am kind of badly behaved and not doing well at school. Sometimes he’s just telling me off because I am talking a little to my class-mate, which is ok, but no ok
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Hi,
Can someone here correct this sentence here for me?

"“When I am trying to get along with my teacher, my teacher is stark dismissive. Maybe because I am kind of badly behaved and not doing well at school. Sometimes he’s just telling me off because I am talking a little to my class-mate, which is ok, but no ok if he does it in a cruel away. He is telling me as wall to get off the c

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