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Ant_222 Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Correcting a letter

Hello, friends,

Could you help me refine the following letter, please?

Dear webmasters!

Hereby I ask you to upload the complete series of Loftin and White's articles about their amplifier with direct coupling, for that would be a description of detail and minuteness which cannot be found elsewhere on the internet.

Also, I suggest that you should upload scans of a higher quality, for the current ones are near (almost?) unreadable. That is not due to low resolution but, rather, because of the too high JPEG compression. If size is important for you, then I recommend the DJVU format, a proper use whereof will yield a much better qulity to size ratio.

Thanks in advance,
Anton
  

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Hi, Dear Webmasters, Please upload the complete series of Loftin and White's articles about their amplifier with direct coupling, because they give a detailed description which cannot be found elsewhere on the internet. Also, I suggest that you should upload scans of a higher quality, because the current ones are almost unreadable. This is due not to the low resolution but, rather, because of the excessively high JPEG compression.

  • Hi, Dear Webmasters, Please upload the complete series of Loftin and White's articles about their amplifier with direct coupling, because they give a detailed description which cannot be found elsewhere on the internet.
  • Also, I suggest that you should upload scans of a higher quality, because the current ones are almost unreadable.
  • This is due not to the low resolution but, rather, because of the excessively high JPEG compression.
  • If size is important for you, then I recommend the DJVU format, which will give a much better quality-to-size ratio.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

Dear Webmasters,

Please upload the complete series of Loftin and White's articles about their amplifier with direct coupling, because they give a detailed description which cannot be found elsewhere on the internet.

Also, I suggest that you should upload scans of a higher quality, because the current ones are almost unreadable. This is due not
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Many thanks for correcting both the grammar and style!

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