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Perfect Stranger Posted 14 years ago
Business & Finance

Corrected by me

Hi,


Can you tell me if this sentence needs any corrections?


Any remittances out of China will not be permitted until received the instructions.


My version:


Any remittances out of China will not be permitted unless specific instructions are received.
  

Top answer

Hi, Can you tell me if this sentence needs any corrections? Any remittances out of China will not be permitted until received the instructions. The last part is incorrect grammar.

— Clive

  • Hi, Can you tell me if this sentence needs any corrections?
  • Any remittances out of China will not be permitted until received the instructions.
  • The last part is incorrect grammar.
  • My version: Any remittances out of China will not be permitted unless specific instructions are received.
  • Are you talking about sending money from inside China to a destination outside China?
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Hi,

Can you tell me if this sentence needs any corrections?

Any remittances out of China will not be permitted until received the instructions. The last part is incorrect grammar.

My version:

Any remittances out of China will not be p
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To be honest Clive I'm not sure what my friend wanted to say... His English is pretty bad and I just tried my best to express what I think he wanted to say.

My guess is that what he wanted to say would be something like this: Unless a specific request is received from party B (that is located in a foreign country) no funds shall be transferred from China (where party A is located)
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Hi,

Well his or her words didn't convey that meaning. We are both left to guess.


Clive
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