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The line graph shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four attractions in Edinburgh between 1980 to 2010

Overall, it’s clear that the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh there were considerable fluctuations from 1980 to 2010

The percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited the Edinburgh aquarium significantly increased by 15%, from 20% to 35% from 1980 to 1985, and then considerable dropped by 27%, from 35% to 8% from 1985 to 2010

During, 1980s to 1995s the percentage of tourist to Scotland who visited the Edinburgh castle rose quickly by 20%, from 25% to 45% . After that decreased gradually to 31% in 2010

The percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited the Edinburgh festival dropped slightly 3%, from 30% to 27% from 1980 to 2010

Finally, the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited the Edinburgh zoo fluctuate slightly by 5%, from 10% to 15% from 1980 to 2005 and then increased slightly by 5%, from 15% to 20% from 2005 to 2010.