Correct writing task 2

Nowadays, children are independent ahead of time due to many reason such as parents both go out to work, study at boarding school,...For that reason, children become distant and disobey to their parents. Family plays a major in life, it is undeniable that children should follow their parents advice. From my point of view, I strongly agree with this statement.

The first reason is children are lack of knowledge and experience so they need specific guidance from their parents. In other words, parents gained enough experience to discriminate double-edged of life. For instance, parents know how drugs effect to mental and physical health, therefore, children should avoid using drugs.

More than that, the reason that I believe children should follow their parents commandment is parents have been through ups and downs in their life who always craving the best for their children. Parents are the first people who helps children approach outside world, they teach their children how to walk and countless lesson that school doesn't teach. My dad often calls me when I come home late.

In conclusion, parents completely know which is the best for their children. I think it is wonderful for children to follow their parents advice.