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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Correct word order?
Before transferring the sum of corresponding Transactions to the Merchant, Branch deducts commission fee stipulated by Article 1.3. of the Contract on Bank’s behalf.
is placement "on Bank's behalf" correct?
Thanks!
is placement "on Bank's behalf" correct?
Thanks!
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The entire sentence is problematic. 3. of the contract) from the total amount of the corresponding transactions before transferring the funds to the merchant.
- The entire sentence is problematic.
- 3.
- of the contract) from the total amount of the corresponding transactions before transferring the funds to the merchant.
- This is clearer, although it is unclear what the transactions correspond to.
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The entire sentence is problematic.
The branch will deduct the commissions and fees (payable to the bank as stipulated by article 1.3. of the contract) from the total amount of the corresponding transactions before transferring the funds to the merchant.
This is clearer, although it is unclear what the transactions correspond to.
The branch will deduct the commissions and fees (payable to the bank as stipulated by article 1.3. of the contract) from the total amount of the corresponding transactions before transferring the funds to the merchant.
This is clearer, although it is unclear what the transactions correspond to.
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