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Antonija Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary

Correct update

Is this sentence OK?

XY forms should be signed by Z once he is satisfied with the correct update of the XY.

or

XY forms should be signed by Z once he is satisfied that XY have been updated correctly.

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Top answer

Antonija XY forms should be signed by Z once he is satisfied that XY they have been updated correctly. As shown above. There's no need to repeat "XY forms"; it will just sound clumsy.

— CalifJim

  • Antonija XY forms should be signed by Z once he is satisfied that XY they have been updated correctly.
  • As shown above.
  • There's no need to repeat "XY forms"; it will just sound clumsy.
  • CJ
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AntonijaXY forms should be signed by Z once he is satisfied that XY they have been updated correctly.
As shown above. There's no need to repeat "XY forms"; it will just sound clumsy.

CJ
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