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Egyptian2007 Posted 18 years ago
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0 I see nothing wrong with it. It's a rather ponderous sentence, however, and I would probably edit it to make it two sentences. 0-

— Philip

  • 0 I see nothing wrong with it.
  • It's a rather ponderous sentence, however, and I would probably edit it to make it two sentences.
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0 I see nothing wrong with it. It's a rather ponderous sentence, however, and I would probably edit it to make it two sentences. 0-
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