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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Correct this please
Sorry to write such a long writings. I have selfintroduction report and grammar is also important. So I need your help:)
-Hello my name Jack.
I was born in 1993. I'm freshman in this college. Before I become College student, I lived in Tokyo.
Last year I studied in private education institute to re-challenge Korean Sat. That was very hard time for me.
My hobby is playing soccer and I also enjoy watching movie or listening music. Of course I often appreciate current pop music but I prefer old pop to new things
My short term aim is entering law school. And I hope that will be accomplished. I will study hard also.
Thank you for listening.
-Hello my name Jack.
I was born in 1993. I'm freshman in this college. Before I become College student, I lived in Tokyo.
Last year I studied in private education institute to re-challenge Korean Sat. That was very hard time for me.
My hobby is playing soccer and I also enjoy watching movie or listening music. Of course I often appreciate current pop music but I prefer old pop to new things
My short term aim is entering law school. And I hope that will be accomplished. I will study hard also.
Thank you for listening.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to fix them and then post your revised text here. Hello my name Jack.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- Please try to fix them and then post your revised text here.
- Hello my name Jack.
- I was born in 1993.
- I'm freshma n in this college.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to fix them and then post your revised text here.
Hello my name Jack. I was born in 1993. I'm freshman in this college. Before I become College student, I lived in Tokyo. Last year I studied in private education institute to re-challenge Korean Sat. That was very hard time for me. M
Hello my name Jack. I was born in 1993. I'm freshman in this college. Before I become College student, I lived in Tokyo. Last year I studied in private education institute to re-challenge Korean Sat. That was very hard time for me. M
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