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Ilma Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Correct this please :)
Rainy day Here
Iam, under the tree
Look around
See nothing
Just a man with his thousands poem,
Another man, with his mellow guitar
And last man, with a cup of hot coffee
But no one see me
Iam nothing
Iam nothing
Iam, under the tree
Look around
See nothing
Just a man with his thousands poem,
Another man, with his mellow guitar
And last man, with a cup of hot coffee
But no one see me
Iam nothing
Iam nothing
Top answer
Hi Ilma - it's John, your chat pal. " Rainy Day Here I am under the tree Looking around Seeing nothing Just the man with thousands of poems, Another man, with his mellow guitar And another with a cup of hot coffee But no one sees me I am nothing I am nothing
- Hi Ilma - it's John, your chat pal.
- " Rainy Day Here I am under the tree Looking around Seeing nothing Just the man with thousands of poems, Another man, with his mellow guitar And another with a cup of hot coffee But no one sees me I am nothing I am nothing
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Hi Ilma - it's John, your chat pal.
I am always quite hesitant to correct poetry for fear that I will take away "poetic license."
Rainy Day Here
I am under the tree
Looking around
Seeing nothing
Just the man with thousands of poems,
Another man, with his mellow guitar
And another with a cup of hot coffee
But no one sees me
I am nothi
I am always quite hesitant to correct poetry for fear that I will take away "poetic license."
Rainy Day Here
I am under the tree
Looking around
Seeing nothing
Just the man with thousands of poems,
Another man, with his mellow guitar
And another with a cup of hot coffee
But no one sees me
I am nothi
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