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Believer Posted 19 years ago
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00Hi, Thank you for attending our much waited Conference and hope you will come to our conference next year. We, in the planning committee, wish to work ahead and plan things before hand to make the conference better every year and that is why your filling out this form to provide us with important feedback will be appreciated. We assure you that a very hard look at the feedback will be taken and reflect that seriously to make the next event better and professionally ran.02br
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001. Do you think the time period allotted for each session was adequate? Would you like to see it shortened or made it longer?02br
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002. Was the number of seminars satisfactory to you? Should we have more seminars or less of them next year? (Can I write "Should we have more or less seminars next year?" The problem is that it doesn't seem to offering choices.) 02br
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002. Was the quality of presenters satisfactory to you? Do you want us to have better presentators? Do you have any presentator in particular in your mind that stood out as being outstanding and what qualities did he exhibit that made you think so?02br
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003. Was seminar equipment working properly as you saw it and was functioning properly when needed to be? Do you feel our equipment need to be modernized and if so, what can you suggest to make it more up-to-date and current?02br
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004. Were you happy with availability of snacks and drinks? Are there any improvements we can make on providing you with those much-needed energy and quench summer-thirst while you are attending our numerous seminars -- possibly different blends of snacks or types of drinks?02br
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005. Were the guides and helpers around the Conference site helpful and courtesious? 02br
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00Thank you for answering these questions. We willl assure that your feedback will be considered seriously in our decision-making process for the great coming event. Please join us next year.0-
  

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  • 02br 00 Was01b 00 the 02b 00seminar equipment working 02br 00 was it functioning properly 02br 00 Do you feel our equipment 01b 00needs02b 00 to be modernized (more natural that 01i 00need02i 00 as subjunctive)02br 00 courtesious?
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0 much-awaited02br
00 We, the planning committee, ... (more natural)02br
00 We in the planning committee (more rare) 02br
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00 presenters, presentators??02br
00 Was01b00 the 02b00seminar equipment working 02br
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0 Thank you for your help, Marius. I hope for more of your help in the future. 0-

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