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Believer Posted 19 years ago
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00 Please correct this short e-mail. 02 br
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00 Atten: Lost and Found Dept. 02 br
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00 This e-mail is written to inform you that I have lost a gold watch while riding the (your??) subway. This incidence might have happened while I was in Line No. 7, going (heading??) to the Nunsan direction or in Line 4, heading to the Nowhere direction, between 6 p.m and 7:30 p.m. I took the subway at First Station trying to go to Eoonsan at around 6 p.m., and as usual, both lines were very crowded and with lots of milling around while in the train and while in the process of changing the train (subway??) line, I found myself without my gold watch around 7:30 p.m in your Line 4 subway. It just could be that the watch band was accidentally loosened and dropped to the floor of one of two subway line trains (I don't know for sure). I pray that a good samaritan have picked it up and placed it in your department. If you have my watch in store, please let me know. You can contact me at 01 i 00 ________ 02 i 00 . Thank you in advance. 02 br
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00 Please correct this short e-mail. 02 br
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00 Atten: Lost and Found Dept. 02 br
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00 Hi, 02 br
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00 This e-mail is written to inform you that I have lost a gold watch while riding the (your??) subway. This incidence might have happened while I was in Line No. 7, going (heading??) to the Nunsan direction or in Line 4, heading to the Nowhere direction, between 6 p.m and 7:30 p.m. I took the subway at First Station trying to go to Eoonsan at around 6 p.m., and as usual, both lines were very crowded and with lots of milling around while in the train and while in the process of changing the train (subway??) line, I found myself without my gold watch around 7:30 p.m in your Line 4 subway. It just could be that the watch band was accidentally loosened and dropped to the floor of one of two subway line trains (I don't know for sure). I pray that a good samaritan have picked it up and placed it in your department. If you have my watch in store, please let me know. You can contact me at 01 i 00 ________ 02 i 00 . Thank you in advance. 02 br
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0 This e-mail is written to inform you that I have lost a gold watch while riding 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 subway. This 01 b 01 del 00 incidence 02 del 00 (if you really want to include something here, it would be 'incident') 02 b 00 might have happened while I was 01 b 00 on 02 b 00 Line No. m.
- 0 This e-mail is written to inform you that I have lost a gold watch while riding 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 subway.
- This 01 b 01 del 00 incidence 02 del 00 (if you really want to include something here, it would be 'incident') 02 b 00 might have happened while I was 01 b 00 on 02 b 00 Line No.
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- m on your Line 4 subway.
- It 01 b 00 could just 02 b 00 be that the watch band was accidentally loosened and dropped to the floor of one of two subway line trains (I don't know for sure).
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0 This e-mail is written to inform you that I have lost a gold watch while riding 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 subway. This 01 b 01 del 00 incidence 02 del 00 (if you really want to include something here, it would be 'incident') 02 b 00 might have happened while I was 01 b 00 on 02 b 00 Line No. 7, 01 b 00 heading in 02 b
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