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Believer Posted 19 years ago
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Correct this please
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00 Please correct this short writing. 02 br
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00 Ladies and Gentlemen, thank you for being here and I am particularly appreciative of fact that some of you came here from a long way. I called for a meeting because, as you have noticed from my prior communication to you all, I feel there are some issues that warrant our immediate attention and they are on how to deal with these: 02 br
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00 1) Sagging employee morale, 02 br
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00 2) Frequent thefts of company properties, 02 br
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00 3) Reverse the rapid employee attrition rate 02 br
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00 I would apppreciate it if we could come up with some workable solutions to these issues today at this meeting and believe some minute details of implementation of those solution could be left for discussion at a later meeting. 02 br
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00 Now, let us start the meeting. 0-
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00 Please correct this short writing. 02 br
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00 Sort of a speech: 02 br
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00 Ladies and Gentlemen, thank you for being here and I am particularly appreciative of fact that some of you came here from a long way. I called for a meeting because, as you have noticed from my prior communication to you all, I feel there are some issues that warrant our immediate attention and they are on how to deal with these: 02 br
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00 1) Sagging employee morale, 02 br
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00 2) Frequent thefts of company properties, 02 br
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00 3) Reverse the rapid employee attrition rate 02 br
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00 I would apppreciate it if we could come up with some workable solutions to these issues today at this meeting and believe some minute details of implementation of those solution could be left for discussion at a later meeting. 02 br
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00 Now, let us start the meeting. 0-
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00 i ve not enough english for this 02 br
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00 "thank you for being here and I am particularly appreciative of fact that some of you came here from a long way" 02 br
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00 the above sentence is wrong. 02 br
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00 i ve not enough english for this 02 br
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00 "thank you for being here and I am particularly appreciative of fact that some of you came here from a long way" 02 br
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00 the above sentence is wrong. 02 br
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01 cite 10 Believer 12 cite 10 Hi, 12 br
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10 Please correct this short writing. 12 br
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10 Ladies and Gentlemen, thank you for being here and I 11 del10 am particularly appreciative of fact 12 del10 11 font 1
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0 Thank you, Feebs11, for adding the elements of action and immediacy if I interpreted your responding remark correctly. 02 br
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00 Thank you too, Saltukhan. I do agree that the sentence you mentioned needs improvement. 0-
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00 Thank you too, Saltukhan. I do agree that the sentence you mentioned needs improvement. 0-
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