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Believer Posted 19 years ago
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00 This is a short e-mail message. Please correct it. 02 br
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00 This is ZZZ. How have you been? I hope you all have been doing well and those of you who have businesses, I hope they are propering.I am witing this because it has been quite a while since we got together. I feel this is the right time to meet up to talk about our goals for this year and work on the details to accomplish those goals. How about it, members? Are you up to it? I want to let you know that it just happen to be that I bought a new house in a scenic mountain and feel that having a meeting there 01 u 00 might (would??) 02 u 00 be a great idea. It will help you relieve some of your tiresome bodies and give some of you a rest that might be needed desperately. If you are willing to take up on my offer, please let me know by e-mail by the end of this month, so I can proceed to work on the rest of the detail to set up this meeting in my house. 02 br
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00 I hope to hear from you all soon. 02 br
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00 If you think the underlined part shoud be 'would', why? 02 br
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00 Truly, 02 br
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00 ZZZ 0-
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00 This is a short e-mail message. Please correct it. 02 br
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00 Hi all, 02 br
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00 This is ZZZ. How have you been? I hope you all have been doing well and those of you who have businesses, I hope they are propering.I am witing this because it has been quite a while since we got together. I feel this is the right time to meet up to talk about our goals for this year and work on the details to accomplish those goals. How about it, members? Are you up to it? I want to let you know that it just happen to be that I bought a new house in a scenic mountain and feel that having a meeting there 01 u 00 might (would??) 02 u 00 be a great idea. It will help you relieve some of your tiresome bodies and give some of you a rest that might be needed desperately. If you are willing to take up on my offer, please let me know by e-mail by the end of this month, so I can proceed to work on the rest of the detail to set up this meeting in my house. 02 br
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00 I hope to hear from you all soon. 02 br
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00 If you think the underlined part shoud be 'would', why? 02 br
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00 Truly, 02 br
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00 ZZZ 0-
Top answer
0 You have a few spelling typos but I'm sure you can find those. 02 br 02 br 00 I would use would in that sentence. You clearly think it is a great idea to meet there.
- 0 You have a few spelling typos but I'm sure you can find those.
- 02 br 02 br 00 I would use would in that sentence.
- You clearly think it is a great idea to meet there.
- 02 br 02 br 00 It will help you 00 relieve some of your tiresome bodies 00 and give some of you a rest that might be needed desperately.
- 02 br 02 br 00 this needs re-phrasing.
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0 You have a few spelling typos but I'm sure you can find those. 02 br
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00 I would use would in that sentence. You clearly think it is a great idea to meet there. If you say 'might' it sounds as though you are doubtful about whether it is a great idea or not. 02 br
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00 It will help you 00 relieve some of your tiresome bodies 00 and give some of you
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00 I would use would in that sentence. You clearly think it is a great idea to meet there. If you say 'might' it sounds as though you are doubtful about whether it is a great idea or not. 02 br
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0 Thank you, Nona. 02 br
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00 Why did you change the verb 'will' to 'would' in this part of my sentence "If you 01 u 00 would 02 u 00 like to tyake me up on my offer"? Is 'will' unduly strong of a word for the context given? I must say, on a second thought, 'would' is a popular choice (as it seems to me at this time). 0-
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00 Why did you change the verb 'will' to 'would' in this part of my sentence "If you 01 u 00 would 02 u 00 like to tyake me up on my offer"? Is 'will' unduly strong of a word for the context given? I must say, on a second thought, 'would' is a popular choice (as it seems to me at this time). 0-
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0 We just don't ever use 'will' in that context. 02 br
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00 Really you are asking them a question very indirectly. 02 br
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00 Would you like to take me up on my offer? 02 br
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00 Really you are asking them a question very indirectly. 02 br
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0 We just don't ever use 'will' in that context. 02 br
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00 Really you are asking them a question very indirectly. 02 br
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00 Yes, I would like to come 02 br
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00 Really you are asking them a question very indirectly. 02 br
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