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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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00I saw this in the Asiana Airlines brochure.02br
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00It is an one-kilometer-long area along the 1st street in the north of downtown. There are diverse federal, state, county adn city administrative headquarters and in particular, the white antique style city governmet building is very impressive. It is an architecture mixed with Greek-, Roman-, Renaissance-style but the apperance is totally American. It is the 32-story building and at the observatory on the 27th floor you can see all streets of Los Angeles in 25-kilometer radius. 0-
  

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1i 00Civic Center02i 02br 02br 01i 00It is01b 00 a 02b 00one-kilometer-long area along 01b 00First Street02b 00 01b 00north02b 00 of downtown. There are 01b 00various02b 00 federal, state, county01b 00 and02b 00 city administrative 01b 00offices02b 00 and in particular, the white antique01b 00-02b 00style city 01b 00government 02b 00building is very impressive. 01b 00Its 02b 00architecture 01b 00is a02b 00 mixed 01b 00Greek, Roman and Renaissance 02b 00style01b 00,02b 00 but i01b 00ts appearance02b 00 is totally American.

  • 1i 00Civic Center02i 02br 02br 01i 00It is01b 00 a 02b 00one-kilometer-long area along 01b 00First Street02b 00 01b 00north02b 00 of downtown.
  • There are 01b 00various02b 00 federal, state, county01b 00 and02b 00 city administrative 01b 00offices02b 00 and in particular, the white antique01b 00-02b 00style city 01b 00government 02b 00building is very impressive.
  • 01b 00Its 02b 00architecture 01b 00is a02b 00 mixed 01b 00Greek, Roman and Renaissance 02b 00style01b 00,02b 00 but i01b 00ts appearance02b 00 is totally American.
  • It is01b 00 a02b 00 32-story building01b 00,02b 00 and 01b 00from02b 00 the observatory on the 27th floor01b 00,02b 00 you can see all 01b 00the02b 00 streets of Los Angeles 01b 00within a 02b 0025-kilometer radius.
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1i00Civic Center02i02br
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01i00It is01b00 a 02b00one-kilometer-long area along 01b00First Street02b00 01b00north02b00 of downtown. There are 01b00various02b00 federal, state, county01b00 and02b00 city administrative 01b00offi
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0Thank you, Mr. M.02br
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00I would like to mention that the original writing in the brochure did not have the spelling mistake involving the word 'and'. It wasn't spelled 'adn' but was correctly spelled 'and'. 02br
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00I also find the Asiana Airlines to be a great airliner with great service.0-

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