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Daniel Posted 23 years ago
Letter Writing

Correct this mail

How should i mention that i am contact this guy because someone else told me to do so ?
Does "Thank you for your assistance" fit in ?
Otherwise, is it understandable ?
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Dear M. Y

I have talked with M. X about my research on "international collaboration in armament procurement" and he advised me to contact you for details on Nordic cooperation .

I have already found the following international programs (I actually focus on the R&D stage) to which Norway participates :

- ...
- ...

May I ask you if you know some that I missed, since it is quite uneasy to get information on historical collaboration (from WWII) ?

Thank you for your assistance.
  

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Hi Daniel, welcome to the forums, Here's a quick re-write; I'm not 100% sure what you were trying to say though. Hope this helps. Dear Mr.

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  • Hi Daniel, welcome to the forums, Here's a quick re-write; I'm not 100% sure what you were trying to say though.
  • Hope this helps.
  • Dear Mr.
  • X.
  • He has advised me to contact you for details on Nordic cooperation.
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Hi Daniel, welcome to the forums,

Here's a quick re-write; I'm not 100% sure what you were trying to say though.

Hope this helps.
Dear Mr. Y

I’ve recently been discussing my research on "international collaboration in armament procurement" with Mr.X. He has advised me to contact you for details on Nordic cooperation.

I have already found the following
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