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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

correct this letter, please.

0 May I request you to send me one copy of your latest catalog by which I can enjoy shopping.02br
00 For your convenience, I have remitted the amount U.S. $10.00 to cover catalog cost.02br
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00 Could you please correct this letter?02br
00 Thank you.02br
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S. 02br 02br 00Could you please correct this letter? 02font 00My main comment is that it sounds too formal and fancy.

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  • 02br 02br 00Could you please correct this letter?
  • 02font 00My main comment is that it sounds too formal and fancy.
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0Hi,02br
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01font00May I request you to send me one copy of your latest catalog by which I can enjoy shopping.02br
00For your convenience, I have remitted the amount U.S. $10.00 to cover catalog cost.02br
02br
00Could you please correct this letter? 02font
00My main comment is that it sounds too formal

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