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02br 02br 00Could you please correct this letter?
02font 00My main comment is that it sounds too formal and fancy.
0Hi,02br 02br 01font00May I request you to send me one copy of your latest catalog by which I can enjoy shopping.02br 00For your convenience, I have remitted the amount U.S. $10.00 to cover catalog cost.02br 02br 00Could you please correct this letter? 02font00My main comment is that it sounds too formal