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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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00Let's pretend that I am running for President of an organization and this is the platform which I will go by. Please correct the writing.02br
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00If I am elected I will make the following changes for the betterment of our organization. Changing times we are living in seem to ask us to adapt and make some necessary changes for us to progress further. To remain status quo means to me is to regress backward. Every other organizations seem to be equipping themselves for changing times and I feel we need to makes these changes which are listed below. Under my leadership, I will assure you that these changes will be made and will be done at the right time.02br
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00The changes I propose are:02br
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001. Restructure organization charts to better position staff members to function optimally,02br
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002. Make short and long term plans to plan ahead and to be proactive,02br
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003. Conduct an extensive study every year to find out who the recipients of our services are and whether they are in fact getting those services at the appropriate time periods.02br
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00Thank you and hope you will vote for me. 0-
  

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0Proposed changes seem a bit generic to me. )0-

  • 0Proposed changes seem a bit generic to me.
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0Proposed changes seem a bit generic to me. (I assume this is going to be a speech?)0-

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