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Believer Posted 18 years ago
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Correct these greetings please

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001.May your new year be a blessed one, filled with joy of simplicity and sharing. -- should I say "joys of simplicity and sharing"? Can the word 'joy' as uncountable be able to accommodate two nouns that come after?02br
002. May your family be blessed in many ways and in many more ways and may your laughter not be ceased in your household.02br
003. May Him grant you good health and material well-being as not to lack in any way to carry out the work of your Father in heaven. 02br
004. May your tomorrows always be in the sunrise and never in the sunset -- never to see gloomy days again. 0-
  

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May your new year be a blessed one, filled with 01b 00the joys/joy02b 00 of simplicity and sharing. -- 02br 02br 00 2. 02br 02br 00 3.

— Marius Hancu

  • May your new year be a blessed one, filled with 01b 00the joys/joy02b 00 of simplicity and sharing.
  • -- 02br 02br 00 2.
  • 02br 02br 00 3.
  • May Him grant you good health and material well-being 01b 00so as not to want02b 00 in any way to carry out the work of your Father in heaven.
  • 02br 00want=lack 02br 00here 02br 02br 00 4.
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0 1.May your new year be a blessed one, filled with 01b00the joys/joy02b00 of simplicity and sharing. -- 02br
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01cite10Marius Hancu12cite103. May 11b11font10Him12font12b10 grant you good health and material well-being 11b10so as not to want12b10 in any way to carry out the work of your Father in heaven. 12blockquote
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Thank you, Marius, for giving me a joy of knowing with your revision.
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