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Believer Posted 20 years ago
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Correct the writing
Let's say this person writing a short letter to the friend he is not so familar with or the friend is not so familiar with him.
Hi Sindo,
I am having a great time here in ZZZ. The food here is great and the people are just fabulous. I haven't seen the rain for a month and I am now sitting a large lounge chair relaxing, Oh, let me tell you about myself.
I am twenty-two years young and has a bachelor degree from ZZ university and spent sometime in medical school before dropping out to pursue a career in dancing. I have a great wife who understands me and also have two boys, one is six and the other is seven, both of them healthy. I worked for two internationally known companies before starting to work for the present company. They graciously gave me a two-week vacation and I am relaxing here now. A thank-you for my employer.
If you want to know more about me, call me anytime.
See you soon.
Love,
Your new friend
Hi Sindo,
I am having a great time here in ZZZ. The food here is great and the people are just fabulous. I haven't seen the rain for a month and I am now sitting a large lounge chair relaxing, Oh, let me tell you about myself.
I am twenty-two years young and has a bachelor degree from ZZ university and spent sometime in medical school before dropping out to pursue a career in dancing. I have a great wife who understands me and also have two boys, one is six and the other is seven, both of them healthy. I worked for two internationally known companies before starting to work for the present company. They graciously gave me a two-week vacation and I am relaxing here now. A thank-you for my employer.
If you want to know more about me, call me anytime.
See you soon.
Love,
Your new friend
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Hi Sindo, I am having a great time here in ZZZ. The food here is great and the people are just fabulous. I haven't seen any rain for a month and I am now sitting a large lounge chair relaxing.
- Hi Sindo, I am having a great time here in ZZZ.
- The food here is great and the people are just fabulous.
- I haven't seen any rain for a month and I am now sitting a large lounge chair relaxing.
- Oh, let me tell you about myself.
- I am twenty-two years young (I guess the use of young instead of old is a joke?
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Hi Sindo,
I am having a great time here in ZZZ. The food here is great and the people are just fabulous. I haven't seen any rain for a month and I am now sitting a large lounge chair relaxing. Oh, let me tell you about myself.
I am twenty-two years young (I guess the use of young instead of old is a joke? It's usually used by people who are actually quite old, rather tha
I am having a great time here in ZZZ. The food here is great and the people are just fabulous. I haven't seen any rain for a month and I am now sitting a large lounge chair relaxing. Oh, let me tell you about myself.
I am twenty-two years young (I guess the use of young instead of old is a joke? It's usually used by people who are actually quite old, rather tha
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Hi Sindo,
I am having a great time here in ZZZ. The food here is great and the people are just fabulous. I haven't seen the rain for a month and I am now sitting on a large lounge chair relaxing, Oh, let me tell you something about myself.
I am twenty-two years old and has a bachelor degree from ZZ university and spent sometime in medical school before drop
I am having a great time here in ZZZ. The food here is great and the people are just fabulous. I haven't seen the rain for a month and I am now sitting on a large lounge chair relaxing, Oh, let me tell you something about myself.
I am twenty-two years old and has a bachelor degree from ZZ university and spent sometime in medical school before drop
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