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Achucoul Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Correct the sentences please
Dear Mr. William,
As I said before, we lost many orders from our customers due to non availability of items in our stock. Even though our prices are lesser than our competitors, we are losing orders just because of the above said reason. Hence, I request you to keep the items in our stock. That enables us for not losing orders any further.
As I said before, we lost many orders from our customers due to non availability of items in our stock. Even though our prices are lesser than our competitors, we are losing orders just because of the above said reason. Hence, I request you to keep the items in our stock. That enables us for not losing orders any further.
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I assume that Mr. William is in charge of your inventory. It is rather repetitive, so I have shortened it: As I have previously pointed out, we have lost many customer orders due to stock being unavailable.
- I assume that Mr.
- William is in charge of your inventory.
- It is rather repetitive, so I have shortened it: As I have previously pointed out, we have lost many customer orders due to stock being unavailable.
- Even though our prices are lower than our competition, we are losing orders when items are out of stock.
- So that we do not lose further orders, I request that you make sure that we always have items in stock.
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I assume that Mr. William is in charge of your inventory. It is rather repetitive, so I have shortened it:
As I have previously pointed out, we have lost many customer orders due to stock being unavailable. Even though our prices are lower than our competition, we are losing orders when items are out of stock. So that we do not lose further orders, I request that you make sure that we
As I have previously pointed out, we have lost many customer orders due to stock being unavailable. Even though our prices are lower than our competition, we are losing orders when items are out of stock. So that we do not lose further orders, I request that you make sure that we
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achucoulDear Mr. William,This is odd. Mr does not, normally go before first names.
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AnonymousThis is odd. Mr does not, normally go before first names.Agreed. I took this to be a surname.
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