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Kavimba Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Correct the sentences...
Hi All,
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These sentences are reply to the HR person reg job....
I thank you for your reply .. I have posted some of my works in my website yet i have lot more works to be published but as of now you can see my works in my below website :xxxxxx
And a small request do not mistake me as a LinkedIn.com member in your link i would like to know what's the major difference between working in company as designer & working as a freelancing designer.
I want to make a great career in design & animation sector. So far i have attended more than 50 interviews related to Graphic Design, Web Design, 2D Animation, Sound Mixing. Mostly I get selected 90% but i was unable to work in those companies due to my higher studies on Maya until November end but i gain lot more experience in those interviews question i don't find any difference as freelance designer or working as a company employee as Graphic Designer but 60% people say that there is lot of difference & you gain experience when i work as company employee they say ..
Do you believe so, If you guide me i can do more better than what others say with my hard work, talent, creativity, planned work sir...
Awaited for your reply. Thank You.
Regards,
Kavi.
Let me check and revert.....
These sentences are reply to the HR person reg job....
I thank you for your reply .. I have posted some of my works in my website yet i have lot more works to be published but as of now you can see my works in my below website :xxxxxx
And a small request do not mistake me as a LinkedIn.com member in your link i would like to know what's the major difference between working in company as designer & working as a freelancing designer.
I want to make a great career in design & animation sector. So far i have attended more than 50 interviews related to Graphic Design, Web Design, 2D Animation, Sound Mixing. Mostly I get selected 90% but i was unable to work in those companies due to my higher studies on Maya until November end but i gain lot more experience in those interviews question i don't find any difference as freelance designer or working as a company employee as Graphic Designer but 60% people say that there is lot of difference & you gain experience when i work as company employee they say ..
Do you believe so, If you guide me i can do more better than what others say with my hard work, talent, creativity, planned work sir...
Awaited for your reply. Thank You.
Regards,
Kavi.
Top answer
Kavi: You have a lot of repitition and run-on sentences, it does not sound as organized and logical as it could be. A programmer / web designer needs impeccable skills in both artistic design and logical thought. If your letters are not logical, the reader won't be at all impressed with your potential capabilities.
- Kavi: You have a lot of repitition and run-on sentences, it does not sound as organized and logical as it could be.
- A programmer / web designer needs impeccable skills in both artistic design and logical thought.
- If your letters are not logical, the reader won't be at all impressed with your potential capabilities.
- Also, don't tell then that you have failed in other job applications.
- That will cause yours to get added to the reject pile faster than anything!
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Kavi:
You have a lot of repitition and run-on sentences, it does not sound as organized and logical as it could be. A programmer / web designer needs impeccable skills in both artistic design and logical thought. If your letters are not logical, the reader won't be at all impressed with your potential capabilities.
Also, don't tell then that you have failed in other job applica
You have a lot of repitition and run-on sentences, it does not sound as organized and logical as it could be. A programmer / web designer needs impeccable skills in both artistic design and logical thought. If your letters are not logical, the reader won't be at all impressed with your potential capabilities.
Also, don't tell then that you have failed in other job applica
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