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Kavimba Posted 16 years ago
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Dear Sir / Madam,


Let me check and tell that this sentences are right or wrong.....

I saw your ad in LikedIn that your going to contact a event called Tradeshow/Convention in Chennai city center on 23rd July 2010.... Let me know more details about this event because one of my friend doing a courses in multimedia & I want to know that this event is useful for him or not kindly suggest me sir and let me know whether registration is free or not....

Awaited for your reply.....

Regards,
Kavi
  

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Hi Kavi; Welcome to EnglishForward! Here are some suggestions. You might just want to request a brochure describing the event, or a link to a web site that will provide all the information.

  • Hi Kavi; Welcome to EnglishForward!
  • Here are some suggestions.
  • You might just want to request a brochure describing the event, or a link to a web site that will provide all the information.
  • Sometimes the registration cost depends on your status - if you are a full-time student, it might be much less than if you are a professional.
  • ) a n event called Tradeshow/Convention in Chennai city center on 23rd July 2010.
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Hi Kavi;

Welcome to EnglishForward! Here are some suggestions. You might just want to request a brochure describing the event, or a link to a web site that will provide all the information. Sometimes the registration cost depends on your status - if you are a full-time student, it might be much less than if you are a professional.

I saw from your ad in LikedIn (Linked

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