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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Correct the sentences

plz correct the sentences
1 This house is built of bricksand stones.
2 My friend is very ill, i hope he will soon die
3 He is waiting for better and promising opportunity.

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Please correct the sentences . 1 This house is built of bricks and stone . 2 My friend is very il l.

  • Please correct the sentences .
  • 1 This house is built of bricks and stone .
  • 2 My friend is very il l.
  • I hope he won't die soon.
  • 3 He is waiting for a better and more promising opportunity.
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Please correct the sentences.

1 This house is built of bricks and stone.
2 My friend is very ill. I hope he won't die soon.

3 He is waiting for a better and more promising opportunity.
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Could it be like this?
He is waiting for a better and a more promising opportunity.
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Yes indeed, but it doesn't flow so well.
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Mr. M. -- you do realize that you reversed the original poster's death wish for his ill friend, don't you? I agree the original is pretty unusual, but maybe that's what he actually wants to say.
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Yes, I reversed it out of common sense and my own belief about the sanctity of life.

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