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Rea D'souza Posted 8 years ago
Grammar
Correct the sentence please
Clothed in nothing but a pair of shorts, the cold wind caressed the exposed of my body, sending shivers all over.
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You have a textbook dangler there. Just remember, an introductory phrase applies to the subject. In this case, the wind is clad in nothing but shorts.
- You have a textbook dangler there.
- Just remember, an introductory phrase applies to the subject.
- In this case, the wind is clad in nothing but shorts.
- " "Exposed" is not a noun here.
- Try "exposed parts".
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You have a textbook dangler there. Just remember, an introductory phrase applies to the subject. In this case, the wind is clad in nothing but shorts. Maybe "Clothed as I was in nothing but shorts ...."
"Exposed" is not a noun here. Try "exposed parts".
The rest is a matter of style
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