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Englishsridharan Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

correct the sentence

A person who is not a retiring director shall, subject to the provisions of this Act, be eligible for appointment to the office of director at any general meeting, if he or some member intending to propose him has, not less than fourteen days before the meeting, left at the office of the company a notice in writing under his hand signifying his candidature for the office of director or the intention of such member to propose him as· a candidate for that office, as the case may be along with a deposit of five hundred rupees which shall be refunded to such person or, as the case may be, to such member, if the person succeeds in getting elected as a director.
  

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Hi, I suggest that you try to make it shorter, by using more than one sentence. I would also say 'he or she'. Clive

  • Hi, I suggest that you try to make it shorter, by using more than one sentence.
  • I would also say 'he or she'.
  • Clive
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Hi,

I suggest that you try to make it shorter, by using more than one sentence.

I would also say 'he or she'.

Clive
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Hi Clive,

Thanks a lot.
It can not be split into many sentences because it is a statue. I am trying to interpret this Section in Companies Act in India.

Regards,
Sridharan R.
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Hi,

Oh. You asked us to correct it.

Clive

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