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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Correct the sentence
. Due to the students had successfully completed their exams, their parents rewarded
their efforts by giving them a trip to Paris
their efforts by giving them a trip to Paris
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The students successfully completed their exams, and their parents rewarded their efforts by giving them a trip to Paris.
- The students successfully completed their exams, and their parents rewarded their efforts by giving them a trip to Paris.
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The students successfully completed their exams, and their parents rewarded their efforts by giving them a trip to Paris.
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The following is also correct.
(Due to the fact that)(Because) the students had successfully completed their exams, their parents
rewarded (them)(their efforts) (with)(by giving them) a trip to Paris.
(Due to the fact that)(Because) the students had successfully completed their exams, their parents
rewarded (them)(their efforts) (with)(by giving them) a trip to Paris.
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However, be aware that 'due to the fact that' is a phrase discouraged by many style guides:
Although “due to” is now a generally acceptable synonym for “because," "due to the fact that” is a clumsy and wordy substitute that should be avoided in formal writing.
Due to the fact that / The reason is because. These two phrases are both too wordy and too colloquial f
Although “due to” is now a generally acceptable synonym for “because," "due to the fact that” is a clumsy and wordy substitute that should be avoided in formal writing.
Due to the fact that / The reason is because. These two phrases are both too wordy and too colloquial f
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