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Hopead Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Correct the sentence

We would like to request you to send the complementary copy of your esteemed Daily Eenadu at our below mentioned Registered office with immediate effect.
  

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Yours is too wordy, too formal, and too peremptory. 'Please send a complimentary copy of the Daily Eenadu to our registered office, at the address below. '

  • Yours is too wordy, too formal, and too peremptory.
  • 'Please send a complimentary copy of the Daily Eenadu to our registered office, at the address below.
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Yours is too wordy, too formal, and too peremptory.


'Please send a complimentary copy of the Daily Eenadu to our registered office, at the address below. Thank you very much for your service.'
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Thank u for valuable suggestion

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