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MuszlaKlozetowa69 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Correct the mistakes! Homework for school!

Arab Caroline closed in a dark cell, and let go of it just to work. Abdullah lead a junkie to do on a leash, and tied her to a radiator that did not run away. Caroline fed on the remains of dirty plates and dead roaches. Arab forced her to continually standing, heat her ass hot poker. One day Abdullah announced that he intends to marry Caroline. Girl to marry her torturer, because *** for ratings is one thing, but never in my life will suck to some dick of arab. At night, Caroline chewed padlock and fled from the cell. However, Abdullah masturbate under the covers, so that Allah could not see it. When he heard strange noises in the hallway went out to see what was going on. He saw creeping Caroline. He returned to the room, took a bat and went to her capture. Caroline said Haji running. Quickly grabbed the nearest thing - the umbrella - and began to defend. It turned out that this is not an umbrella, only a bazooka. Caroline fired her and killed Abdullah, and by the way smashed home a half. Suddenly, from the remnants of the house had a bunch of black men in straw skirts and hailed his Queen Caroline. Delighted girl orgy and to always invited former professors from Oxford, who really appreciated her sexual services. One professor in exchange for free "sessions" bought her "Diploma of english University Oxfort". Caroline decided to continue working in the "Kebab's and Shish Kebab's" this time as president. Her negro tribe has replaced workers, working for free serving his queen. Caroline also hired to handle the Arab kebabownicy. Soon it turned out that the restaurant revenues are too low. To remedy this, Caroline began to lead the restaurant brothel. Its revenues have doubled. However, her deputy Hamarandych decided to hire a German whores. Half of the customers on the first day turned to attack. Caroline went bankrupt and was deported back to Polish.
  

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Hello Muzia; You have used very rude and dirty language in your paragraph. Do you expect a teacher to accept such obscene language? Most of your sentences do not have correct English grammar.

  • Hello Muzia; You have used very rude and dirty language in your paragraph.
  • Do you expect a teacher to accept such obscene language?
  • Most of your sentences do not have correct English grammar.
  • I do not care to make any corrections on such language.
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Hello Muzia;

You have used very rude and dirty language in your paragraph.
Do you expect a teacher to accept such obscene language?

Most of your sentences do not have correct English grammar.
I do not care to make any corrections on such language.

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