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We are back on Sunday evening around 7:30 from my sister's house.Well,we had a great time over there.
Everything is as usual and my hubby comes home from an exhaust day at work and plops down on the couch for a while and then he will have tea and will do dinner together sometimes.Most of the time he will eat dinner at Mosque during Ramazan.

Whl626 · Accepted Answer

I think it is better to use ' simple past tense '.

We were back on Sunday evening around 7:30 from my sister's house. Well, we had a great time there. Everything was as usual and my hubby came home from work on an exhausting day and plopped down on the couch for a while and then he had tea and made dinner with us together sometimes. Most of the time he ate dinner at Mosque during Ramadan.

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Qualification, aptitude, strength, and growth potentials
I have conducted an analytical approach to many issues and problems by identifying the causes and work to solve them. Also I have an excellent command in following up on the latest cases development that logged in the tracking system and by looking always for ways to implement the best practices for updating the division’s records. Moreover, I determined and analyzed the current needs of the SAA-NA division by changing work assignments and processed new recommendations in order to give all division staff’s possible chance to develop them selves. More to say, I have done great efforts by working with employees in order to handle problems for improving customer satisfaction.

Supported division’s staff by maintaining an awareness of the performance management program (PMP) procedures and showed them how to process it through training courses and self explanation. Also, assisted the deputy manager with many administrative functions as being preferred to carry out full responsibilities of the said division during his absence. This includes A- managing important cases. B- Generating memos. C- Executes both Arabic & English correspondences.

On other hand, I appropriately respond to the needs, feelings, capabilities, and interests of the division staff by presenting various gained methods that learned by experienced with former departments about leadership style to some behavior situations. I have kept demonstrating high standards of appropriate approach to solve problems quietly and providing motivating work. Meekly, I have developed strong insight into some encountered problems by creating change of work environment that encouraged innovative thinking as I did in compliance to the upper management instructions where I came up with more than 25 ideas for SAA titled suggestions and solutions “outside –the –box”.

Most importantly, I have adapted and maintained a customer-focus approach that acknowledges the importance and value of SAA customer, and acted accordingly as professional relation specialist, coordinator, PMP administrator, and assistance to the deputy manager. The other duties which assigned to me made me act wisely for ensuring sound fiscal responsibility and accomplish the set goals regarding work achievements that are associated with it .Before closing, I should add the most important attributes that SAA management attest on my capabilities as being 1- having excellent skills in writing both Arabic & English correspondences 2- Strong computer skills, 3- Verbal communication.

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