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Musthakahmed1 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Correct the grammer mistake

Dear Sir,
With reference to my friend Akbar, i am to apply for the post of Customer care Executive. Kindly find attachment of my CV and please reply to me immediately.

Anticipating reply............
  

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Your writing is a little terse especially for a job application. And is Akbar, your friend, vital to improve your chances? If not, try: "I wish to apply for the post of Customer Care Executive.

— Cbsteh

  • Your writing is a little terse especially for a job application.
  • And is Akbar, your friend, vital to improve your chances?
  • If not, try: "I wish to apply for the post of Customer Care Executive.
  • Attached is my CV, and I look forward to your reply.
  • " If Akbar is some big shot in the company, try: "As advised by Akbar (full name and title), I wish to apply for the post of Customer Care Executive.
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Your writing is a little terse especially for a job application. And is Akbar, your friend, vital to improve your chances? If not, try:

"I wish to apply for the post of Customer Care Executive. Attached is my CV, and I look forward to your reply. Thank you for your time and consideration."

If Akbar is some big shot in the company, try:

"As advised by Akbar (full name an
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