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Parende Posted 4 years ago
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I am not sure of the syntax of the sentences below. Could you please check them?

1. In his comedies, due to the nature of the genre, the consequence of this feeling is not grave, instead jealousy is recounted with a playful lanuage, as in A Midsummer Night's Dream.

2. Shakespeare opens many discussions about how a person can be taken by madness that people still debate about, way before the birth of psychoanalysis.

Alternative for 2:

Shakespeare opens many discussions about how a person can be taken by madness way before psychoanalysis, which people still debate about. (here, is it like I am modifying psychoanalysis?)

  

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parende 1. In his comedies, due to the nature of the genre, the consequence of this feeling is not grave, instead jealousy is recounted with a playful lanuage, as in A Midsummer Night's Dream. Changing as little as possible: "In his comedies, due to the nature of the genre, the consequences of this feeling are not grave.

  • parende 1.
  • In his comedies, due to the nature of the genre, the consequence of this feeling is not grave, instead jealousy is recounted with a playful lanuage, as in A Midsummer Night's Dream.
  • Changing as little as possible: "In his comedies, due to the nature of the genre, the consequences of this feeling are not grave.
  • " parende Shakespeare opens many discussions about how a person can be taken by madness that people still debate about, way before the birth of psychoanalysis.
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parende1. In his comedies, due to the nature of the genre, the consequence of this feeling is not grave, instead jealousy is recounted with a playful lanuage, as in A Midsummer Night's Dream.

Changing as little as possible:

"In his comedies, due to the nature of the genre, the consequences of this feeling are not grave. Instead, jealousy is depicted i

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