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HiiCould you please check whether the following sentences are correct or not?1) I would like to take this opportunity to wish you, as today is your birthday that I suppose.2) Hope you are doing fine there and your family in native place as well. Thanks & regards,AK

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

1) I would like to take this opportunity to wish you a happy birthday.
2) I hope you and your family are doing fine there in your hometown.

Cbakumar · Answer

Thank you very much for your quick response, Mr. Micawber.

But I want to know something else for the sentences. I will rewrite the 1st sentence:

I would like to take this opportunity to wish you, as today is your birthday that I suppose.

Here I am not sure whether his birthday is today or not; but there is a slight memory that today is his birthday. So, I want to change the sentence accordingly.

Now 2nd sentence:

Hope you are doing fine there and your family in native place as well.

Here the person is away from his hometown and staying alone somewhere else. His family is in his hometown. so, I need to change the sentence to suit the situation.

Please help me in this regard.

Thanks & best regards

AK

Mister Micawber · Answer

I would like to take this opportunity to wish you a happy birthday, because I think it is your birthday today.

I hope you are doing fine there and your family is fine back in your home town.

Cbakumar · Answer

Thank you Mr. Micawber

Anonymous · Answer

thanx for remember my birthday.andall fine and happy.

Mister Micawber · Answer

Thanks for remembering my birthday. We are all fine and happy.

Anonymous · Answer

I hope your family doing fine.

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