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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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0It was a gruesome 01b00sight:02b00 the 01b00look 02b00of the faces who died.02br
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00Is the semi-collon correct or is there a better mark? What about 01i00look02i00? Should it be01i00 looks02i00?02br
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00Thank you very much.0-
  

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02font 02br 02br 01font 00Is the semi-collon correct or is there a better mark? What about 01i 00look02i 00? Should it be01i 00 looks02i 00?

  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Is the semi-collon correct or is there a better mark?
  • What about 01i 00look02i 00?
  • Should it be01i 00 looks02i 00?
  • 02u 02br 02br 00But I'd prefer to change it to this.
  • 02br 02br 00It's not a face that dies, it's a person.
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0Hi,02br
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01font00It was a gruesome 01b00sight:02b00 the 01b00look 02b00of the faces who died.02font02br
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01font00Is the semi-collon correct or is there a better mark? What about 01i00look02i00? Should it be01i
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0Can I say, "the look of the faces of 01i00the dead02i00" and still retain the meaning? Thanks!0-
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0Hi,02br
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00It's an odd and awkward way to try to say it. You're trying to say 01b00'a sight . . the look .02b00 . .' It sounds redundant.02br
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00Why don't you just say01b00 'It was a gruesome sight, the faces of the dead'?02b02br
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00Best wishes, Clive0-

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