They would probably pass through the editing process, but the underlined portions are sentence fragments, and need to be completed or connected to the remainder of the text. Capitalization is also a problem in the second one: Not doing enough during school hours, taking longer breaks than usual, and going home before the final bell rings are perennial problems that confront our school and have been screaming for some immediate measures. Tardiness, slow or no participation, and resisting constructive instruction have been confronting our school year after after for the past five years I have been here.
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